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I am writing my opinion about the recent article about the new shopping centre . the new changes are useless , and bring more disadvantages . there will be more jobs but will increase traffic and noise . and the roads and more dangerous , especially for children . It is not normal that problem , protection of children is very important . And with the new changes will after the appearance of the town . The buildings will not look nice and the center would spoil the landscape . I am opposed new decisions , shopping center should not be done , I hope you consider the letter printed .


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GETA1955VIZ
I am writing to you related to the new built shopping center, about which you wrote in your recent article. I agree that this shopping center would bring benefits such as working places. However, it would bring also inconveniences; the traffic would be heavier and would generate car crashes. This area would be so crowded all the time that the children's safety would be jeopardized/endangered. This is an issue that should have been mentioned in the article. On the other hand, the buildings that are to be raised would change the look/appearance of the town. I do not agree with the new changes and I do hope my opinion to be taken into consideration so that the building of new shopping center will not start.
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